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My First Time Cooking Pasta

So, I want try cooking pasta one day. I buy pack from market, but I no read recipe proper. I think it easy, just boil water and put pasta. But I no put salt in water, so pasta taste no good. Then I think maybe add sauce fix it. But I make mistake again. I pour too much sauce and it become all watery.

I also forget to fry garlic first before mix with sauce. It taste raw and strange. My brother eat and say "What this? It taste weird." I feel little bad but also laugh because I know it true. I learn from mistake and next time, I watch cooking video before make pasta. Now I little better in cooking.

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NEW VERSION OF THE CORRECTED TEXT:

My First Time Cooking Pasta

So, I wanted to try cooking pasta one day. I bought a pack from the market, but I didn't read the recipe properly. I thought it would be easy—just boil water and add the pasta. However, I forgot to put salt in the water, so the pasta didn't taste good. Then I thought maybe adding sauce would fix it. But I made another mistake: I poured too much sauce, and it became all watery.

I also forgot to fry the garlic first before mixing it with the sauce. It tasted raw and strange. My brother tasted it and said, "What is this? It tastes weird." I felt a little bad but also laughed because I knew it was true. I learned from my mistakes, and next time, I watched a cooking video before making pasta. Now, I am a little better at cooking.

Changes made:

Changed "want try" to "wanted to try."

Changed "buy pack from market" to "bought a pack from the market."

Changed "I no read recipe proper" to "I didn't read the recipe properly."

Changed "I think it easy" to "I thought it would be easy."

Added an em dash for clarity: "just boil water and add the pasta."

Changed "But I no put salt in water" to "However, I forgot to put salt in the water."

Changed "so pasta taste no good" to "so the pasta didn't taste good."

Changed "Then I think maybe add sauce fix it" to "Then I thought maybe adding sauce would fix it."

Changed "But I make mistake again" to "But I made another mistake."

Changed "I pour too much sauce and it become all watery" to "I poured too much sauce, and it became all watery."

Changed "I also forget to fry garlic first before mix with sauce" to "I also forgot to fry the garlic first before mixing it with the sauce."

Changed "It taste raw and strange" to "It tasted raw and strange."

Changed "My brother eat and say" to "My brother tasted it and said."

Changed "What this? It taste weird" to "What is this? It tastes weird."

Changed "I feel little bad but also laugh because I know it true" to "I felt a little bad but also laughed because I knew it was true."

Changed "I learn from mistake and next time, I watch cooking video before make pasta" to "I learned from my mistakes, and next time, I watched a cooking video before making pasta."

Changed "Now I little better in cooking" to "Now, I am a little better at cooking."

Total changes made: 17