ORIGINAL TEXT:
Yesterday I wake up very late. Alarm clock no ring. I forget to set alarm in night. I rush to wash and wear cloths fastly. I no eat breakfast because no time. Run to station but train already leave. I think "Oh no, what I do now?". I stand there confuse, no idea how go work.
Then I remember bus also go same place. I wait long time for bus, it not come quick. Finally bus arrive but full people, no seat left. I stand whole way. When I reach office, boss already angry. He shout "Why you late?" I say train miss. He say "Not excuse. You need be on time always." My day go bad after that. Everything mess up. I decide no more late waking, always set alarm.
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NEW VERSION OF THE CORRECTED TEXT:
The Day I Missed the Train
Yesterday, I woke up very late. My alarm clock didn’t ring. I had forgotten to set the alarm the night before. I rushed to wash up and get dressed quickly. I didn’t eat breakfast because there was no time. I ran to the station, but the train had already left. I thought, "Oh no, what do I do now?" I stood there, confused, with no idea how to get to work.
Then, I remembered that a bus also goes to the same place. I waited a long time for the bus, but it didn’t come quickly. Finally, the bus arrived, but it was full of people, and there were no seats left. I stood the whole way. When I reached the office, my boss was already angry. He shouted, "Why are you late?" I said I missed the train. He replied, "That’s not an excuse. You need to be on time always." My day went downhill from there. Everything was a mess. I decided I would no longer wake up late and would always set my alarm.
Changes made:
Changed "wake up" to "woke up" for correct past tense.
Added "My" at the beginning of the second sentence for clarity.
Changed "no ring" to "didn’t ring" for grammatical correctness.
Changed "I forget to set alarm in night" to "I had forgotten to set the alarm the night before" for clarity and grammatical correctness.
Changed "wash and wear cloths fastly" to "wash up and get dressed quickly" for fluency and word choice.
Changed "I no eat breakfast because no time" to "I didn’t eat breakfast because there was no time" for grammatical correctness.
Added "I" at the beginning of "Run to station" for grammatical correctness.
Changed "but train already leave" to "but the train had already left" for grammatical correctness.
Changed "I think" to "I thought" for past tense consistency.
Changed "what I do now?" to "what do I do now?" for grammatical correctness.
Changed "I stand there confuse" to "I stood there, confused" for grammatical correctness and fluency.
Changed "how go work" to "how to get to work" for clarity.
Changed "I remember bus also go same place" to "I remembered that a bus also goes to the same place" for grammatical correctness.
Changed "it not come quick" to "but it didn’t come quickly" for grammatical correctness.
Changed "Finally bus arrive but full people, no seat left" to "Finally, the bus arrived, but it was full of people, and there were no seats left" for grammatical correctness and clarity.
Changed "I stand whole way" to "I stood the whole way" for grammatical correctness.
Changed "When I reach office" to "When I reached the office" for past tense consistency.
Changed "boss already angry" to "my boss was already angry" for clarity.
Changed "He shout" to "He shouted" for past tense consistency.
Changed "Why you late?" to "Why are you late?" for grammatical correctness.
Changed "I say train miss" to "I said I missed the train" for grammatical correctness.
Changed "He say" to "He replied" for fluency.
Changed "Not excuse" to "That’s not an excuse" for clarity.
Changed "You need be on time always" to "You need to be on time always" for grammatical correctness.
Changed "My day go bad after that" to "My day went downhill from there" for fluency and clarity.
Changed "Everything mess up" to "Everything was a mess" for grammatical correctness.
Changed "I decide no more late waking, always set alarm" to "I decided I would no longer wake up late and would always set my alarm" for grammatical correctness and clarity.
Total changes made: 27