ORIGINAL TEXT:
It raining very heavy last Sunday. Me and my friend decide go out anyway. We take umbrella but wind so strong, it break umbrella. We wet completely, laughing like crazy people. Road full of water and car splash water on us many time. But we no care, just enjoy.
We find small tea stall and drink chai with hot pakoras. It feel so good in cold weather. Owner of tea stall tell us story about how rain bring luck to him. It was very nice. Then we go home, shoes full mud, clothes wet, but heart happy. Rainy day was best adventure for us.
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NEW VERSION OF THE CORRECTED TEXT:
Rainy Day Adventure
It was raining very heavily last Sunday. My friend and I decided to go out anyway. We took an umbrella, but the wind was so strong that it broke the umbrella. We got completely wet, laughing like crazy people. The road was full of water, and cars splashed water on us many times. But we didn’t care; we just enjoyed ourselves.
We found a small tea stall and drank chai with hot pakoras. It felt so good in the cold weather. The owner of the tea stall told us a story about how the rain brought him luck. It was very nice. Then we went home, our shoes full of mud and our clothes wet, but our hearts were happy. That rainy day was the best adventure for us.
Changes made:
"It raining very heavy last Sunday." → "It was raining very heavily last Sunday."
"Me and my friend decide go out anyway." → "My friend and I decided to go out anyway."
"We take umbrella but wind so strong, it break umbrella." → "We took an umbrella, but the wind was so strong that it broke the umbrella."
"We wet completely, laughing like crazy people." → "We got completely wet, laughing like crazy people."
"Road full of water and car splash water on us many time." → "The road was full of water, and cars splashed water on us many times."
"But we no care, just enjoy." → "But we didn’t care; we just enjoyed ourselves."
"We find small tea stall and drink chai with hot pakoras." → "We found a small tea stall and drank chai with hot pakoras."
"It feel so good in cold weather." → "It felt so good in the cold weather."
"Owner of tea stall tell us story about how rain bring luck to him." → "The owner of the tea stall told us a story about how the rain brought him luck."
"It was very nice." → "It was very nice." (No change needed; retained for flow.)
"Then we go home, shoes full mud, clothes wet, but heart happy." → "Then we went home, our shoes full of mud and our clothes wet, but our hearts were happy."
"Rainy day was best adventure for us." → "That rainy day was the best adventure for us."
Total changes made: 12