ORIGINAL TEXT:
The project we handle is suppose to finish by last week, but now it already delay. The main issue was material supply no arrive on time. Supplier say shipment stuck due to weather, but they no inform us early. This cause work at site to stop for few days.
Then, another problem happen. The subcontractor team make mistake in installation process, and we have to redo the work. It take extra time and money. I try talk to client about this, but he very upset. He say our company must take responsibility and deliver fast.
Now, we working overtime to catch up the deadline, but pressure is too much. I think in future we must improve planning and find reliable supplier to avoid such problem again.
_________
NEW VERSION OF THE CORRECTED TEXT:
Delays in Project Delivery
The project we are handling was supposed to finish last week, but it is now delayed. The main issue was that the materials did not arrive on time. The supplier stated that the shipment was stuck due to the weather, but they did not inform us early enough. This caused work at the site to stop for a few days.
Then, another problem occurred. The subcontractor team made a mistake in the installation process, and we had to redo the work. This took extra time and money. I tried to talk to the client about this, but he was very upset. He said our company must take responsibility and deliver quickly.
Now, we are working overtime to catch up to the deadline, but the pressure is too much. I think in the future, we must improve our planning and find reliable suppliers to avoid such problems again.
Changes made:
"suppose" changed to "supposed"
"but now it already delay" changed to "but it is now delayed"
"material supply no arrive on time" changed to "that the materials did not arrive on time"
"Supplier say shipment stuck due to weather" changed to "The supplier stated that the shipment was stuck due to the weather"
"but they no inform us early" changed to "but they did not inform us early enough"
"This cause work at site to stop for few days" changed to "This caused work at the site to stop for a few days"
"Then, another problem happen" changed to "Then, another problem occurred"
"The subcontractor team make mistake in installation process" changed to "The subcontractor team made a mistake in the installation process"
"and we have to redo the work" changed to "and we had to redo the work"
"It take extra time and money" changed to "This took extra time and money"
"I try talk to client about this" changed to "I tried to talk to the client about this"
"he very upset" changed to "he was very upset"
"He say our company must take responsibility and deliver fast" changed to "He said our company must take responsibility and deliver quickly"
"Now, we working overtime to catch up the deadline" changed to "Now, we are working overtime to catch up to the deadline"
"but pressure is too much" changed to "but the pressure is too much"
"I think in future we must improve planning and find reliable supplier to avoid such problem again" changed to "I think in the future, we must improve our planning and find reliable suppliers to avoid such problems again"
Total changes made: 16